Engagement sesh

[soleshine]

C&C please.
If you go to my tumblr site and look at them in High-res they aren't so soft looking. Idk why they are when I put them here. Aimee Joy
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2. Hollywood Kiss

3. I was trying to be creative with these photos and thought the umbrella added some to this.

 

[tirediron]

C&C per req:

1. What's with the expressions here. Neither one of them look like they want to be here. The background is a bit busy and distracting and the image could stand to be leveled. Did you discuss clothing choices with the couple? A black and white outfit isn't generally the best for optimum exposure.

2. A nice capture, but there's some severe ghosting around her trouser legs, and this image too should be leveled. A little more fill light low from camera right would have helped.

3. Slightly under-exposed; again her outfit did not do you any favours. I have to ask why you have them so far to the right of the frame. The empty space image left isn't really adding much.

Overall, they're not a bad set. Definitely a few issues which could stand improvement, but not bad.

Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

~John