Experiments in composition/C&C pls

[Bryan]

and an abstract for an assigment from an online course suggested on this forum

 

[xtort-]

#1 is excellent, but the rest don't do much for me. Really good work on #1 though!

 

[ypperin]

I agree #1 is definitely the strongest shot, with the best use of the lines and angles and light

 

[rdzmzda]

2 would be better but you cropped off part of the edge...just seems odd to me

 

[Ls3D]

This is abstract? I knew what I was looking immediately, but perhaps my understanding of the term is too literal.

-Shea

 

[Bryan]

This is abstract? I knew what I was looking immediately, but perhaps my understanding of the term is too literal.

-Shea

Probably not your understanding of the term, but mine...guess I need to look at some more abstracts before turning that in

 

[Ls3D]

The cropping tool can make an abstract out of almost any interesting shot. Your last shot almost works, but never seems to come into focus.

-Shea

 

[Bryan]

The cropping tool can make an abstract out of almost any interesting shot. Your last shot almost works, but never seems to come into focus.

-Shea

I have an old friend in Encinitas who I have lost contact with. He is a photog and surfer...Greg Loomer...Encinitas is a small town, or was 20 yrs. ago, do ya know him?

 

[Ls3D]

Not by name but I would probably recognize his photo.

-S

 

[Bryan]

Not by name but I would probably recognize his photo.

-S

oh well...longshot...don't have a pic....probably early 50's now