CorrieMichael
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Fall Familhy photo Shoot - C&C welcome!
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#1 Love!!!! The expression and PP is fantastic. Your skin tones look dead on.
#2 I really like this one as well. I wish they where not right in the center but I love your conversion.
#3 I like this concept and the tones but I would have liked to see the little girls hands and maybe the top of the hands holding the baby.
#4 This one is OOF but I like the PP and the bokeh is really nice. I would have cropped it differently too or got her completely in the shot.
#5 I like your composition and pose in this shot. Great catch lights and connection between the two of them. I would smooth out the skin just a smidge but that might just be my personal preference.
Overall, I think you did a good job. I like your style.
#2 I really like this one as well. I wish they where not right in the center but I love your conversion.
#3 I like this concept and the tones but I would have liked to see the little girls hands and maybe the top of the hands holding the baby.
#4 This one is OOF but I like the PP and the bokeh is really nice. I would have cropped it differently too or got her completely in the shot.
#5 I like your composition and pose in this shot. Great catch lights and connection between the two of them. I would smooth out the skin just a smidge but that might just be my personal preference.
Overall, I think you did a good job. I like your style.
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Thank you so sooooo much! I love the feedback and I love that you broke it all down for me! 
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C&C per req;:
1. Cute, I wish it had been shot either portrait or square and included more of the top of her head.
2. As stated, the square composition isn't ideal, but it's not as bad as the tree growing out of the child's head.
3. A bit cliche for my taste and a tad under-exposed on Mom's trousers.
4. A tighter crop was needed here; the child is almost lost against the background. Don't forget, your camera will work when you turn it 90 degrees counter-clockwise!
5. Any reason to crop their heads? There's a definite green cast to their skin, and lost detail in her hair; a reflector was needed camera right to provide detail in her hair.
Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.
~John
1. Cute, I wish it had been shot either portrait or square and included more of the top of her head.
2. As stated, the square composition isn't ideal, but it's not as bad as the tree growing out of the child's head.
3. A bit cliche for my taste and a tad under-exposed on Mom's trousers.
4. A tighter crop was needed here; the child is almost lost against the background. Don't forget, your camera will work when you turn it 90 degrees counter-clockwise!
5. Any reason to crop their heads? There's a definite green cast to their skin, and lost detail in her hair; a reflector was needed camera right to provide detail in her hair.
Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.
~John
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