This to me does not qualify as a fashion shot. The clothes need to be the hero of the shot, then the makeup and hair, and there is really nothing pulling my attention to any of these things. To me the wardrobe styling is poor and uninteresting, and the hair does not look good to me at all. The lighting is interesting and nice in my opinion, but again I have to point out that it does nothing to bring any sort of attention to the clothing, makeup or hair. I would really work on those things if you want to be creating fashion photography.