Feedback Sought

[elementgs]

The model's name is Erin Shay. This was one of my favorites from the shoot.

I'm having some issues with the coloration on the skin a bit but otherwise like the shot personally.

Any thoughts and feedback is appreciated, thank you.

 

[Derrel]

I would crop that to a square, or to a vertical. The background area on the right hand side is "stealing her thunder", to use an old expression, and does not advance the photo in any real way. Her skin looks a bit too spray-tannish or something. I'm not a big fan of this shot, but I do think a cropped version, or two different cropped versions, would be better than this horizontal framing.