feel like I'm missing something here....

[pixmedic]

have you considered just a WB adjustment?
tonal editing aside, have you thought about a tighter crop using the two trees as framing? it puts her squarely in the right thirds portion of the frame.

 

[Didereaux]

have you considered just a WB adjustment?
tonal editing aside, have you thought about a tighter crop using the two trees as framing? it puts her squarely in the right thirds portion of the frame.

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Pix, I think you are missing something here. The girl alone is not the subject...it is the girl DEEP in the forest!

 

[pixmedic]

have you considered just a WB adjustment?
tonal editing aside, have you thought about a tighter crop using the two trees as framing? it puts her squarely in the right thirds portion of the frame.

View attachment 117476

Pix, I think you are missing something here. The girl alone is not the subject...it is the girl DEEP in the forest!

given the title of the post, I thought I would just throw in my 2 cents.
how does she know if what I suggested wasn't what she decides she was missing if I never make the suggestion?

 

[mmaria]

have you considered just a WB adjustment?

No I haven't... can't imagine this in bw

tonal editing aside, have you thought about a tighter crop using the two trees as framing? it puts her squarely in the right thirds portion of the frame.

and haven't thought about tighter crop because...

..... The girl alone is not the subject...it is the girl DEEP in the forest!

Didereaux explained what I was thinking

given the title of the post, I thought I would just throw in my 2 cents.
how does she know if what I suggested wasn't what she decides she was missing if I never make the suggestion?

of course, I want you to know that I appreciate your suggestions but they just weren't something I envisioned for this picture