Few Attempts C&C please!

[DAKK]

1. Photomatix by stonda415, on Flickr

2.
Photomatix-two by stonda415, on Flickr

3.
sky by stonda415, on Flickr

 

[shootermcgavin]

They are a little over baked, I like them except for the last one which looks like someone painted the sky in photoshop. The second one doesn't seem to need HDR.

 

[480sparky]

Stick a fork in them.......... they're done!

 

[D-B-J]

Way over cooked.

 

[DAKK]

Not exactly sure what cooked or over baked means. But im assuming i need to tone something down?

 

[480sparky]

Over-cooked and over-baked means you've pushed the HDR process so far they look like cartoons, drawings or paintings and not photographs.

 

[JAC526]

I'm in Cincy too....I haven't had the chance to film the Ascent Building (I think that's what its called).

I am itching to do it however. I agree with everyone else...a little over cooked.

 

[ann]

The sky looks like you have tried to create a digital sx-70 manipulate image with a liquify filter. If so, why not apply the same technique to the whole image.

Now this is going to be way out of the box for many , but one never knows until you try.

 

[D-B-J]

Over-cooked and over-baked means you've pushed the HDR process so far they look like cartoons, drawings or paintings and not photographs.

^^ This

 

[robitussin217]

As a set, they are all heavy on the right side. The first one is the best, IMO. I like the composition of the red sidewalk with the bit of red tree sticking out of the top right corner, and the colors in general. The slope of the roof of the building in the second shot leads my eye out of the frame. I'd rather see the vibrant blue building than the gray sky, of which there is a lot. I dislike the last shot because it's so gray, lacks contrast, and looks weird.

 

[that1guy]

grey skies= no bueno!

these look fresh out of the oven ... no ps work done to these at all?

nice try on the first tho... but the greens are too bright