few pics c&c please

[Adam-bacon]

hi here is a few pics i have taken and would just like abit of feed back thanks very much for looking....

 

[Derosa]

These look over-exposed to me. The first two appear oof as well.

 

[misstwinklytoes]

1. Looks like the eyes are OOF or just soft... maybe camera shake or something. It also looks like she's been crying.

2. Adorable, but the dress looks blown in a lot of places.

3. My fav of the bunch, but why does someone so young look like shes pulling the shoulder down on her shirt?

4. Cute, but little girl's head is tilted too far up making her neck look odd. Maybe just a touch too overexposed for my taste.

 

[tirediron]

Agree. ^^

 

[Kyna]

1 and 2 do seem bright.

3 I like A LOT.......and I believe that's the mom not the daughter So the shoulder is age appropriate.

4 is cute but the neck angle is awkward once I was notified about it.

 

[Adam-bacon]

thanks for comments oh and yes she is 28 years old so sholder is fine i think!!

 

[vtf]

I believe 1 and 2 are soft and need selective sharpening.
Not sure of the saturation on #1's clothing, it seems to distract from the baby.
#2 seems overexposed but some do like this.
I am not fond on the processing on 3, I would like to see the original color shot .
The posing in 4 is cute but awkward.
I think its a good start and just keep practicing.:thumbup:

 

[o hey tyler]

Do you have a brother named Kevin?

 

[bobbyknight]

OVEREXPOSED