Consider joining a professional association. They are (sometimes) very open about helping emerging photographers and they might be able to set you up with a mentor etc.
Also, I don't think it would be out of the question to just contact photographers in your area, who's work you admire. E-mail or Phone call would probably be appropriate, but remember that this will be your first contact with them...and first impressions are big. I know a few photographers in my area who get A LOT of these propositions and many of them go ignored, simply because they don't have the time to respond to them all.
So make sure that if you send an e-mail, your spelling, punctuation and grammar are very good. Your post above tells me that you may need some work in this area.
If you are going to call them, be calm, polite, and respectful of their time. Be enthusiastic and passionate.
If you want to be a professional, you should act in a professional manor.
Most of all, don't be too put off my rejection. You may have to contact 20 or 30 photographers before you find one willing to take you on. And even then, don't expect that everyone will offer you a paying job, or even a shooting job. Some will expect that you work for free, your compensation being the knowledge that you gain. Others may expect that you start at the bottom, holding light stands and carrying gear...and that you will have to earn more responsibility as you go.