First 35mm shots C&C

[Brutus]

Recently bought some film for my AE-1 and tried out 35mm for the first time. Here are some of the pictures:

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Underexposed, I know

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Please be as harsh as you think is necessary.

 

[PJL]

I generally like them. I think the DOF is a little too shallow on the robot eating the monkey's head. I love the 2nd one and the one of the tire. I want to like the one of the tree, but something about it just doesn't do it for me. The one with the hay bales is potentially interesting, but I'm not sure exactly what you want me to focus on.

 

[Brutus]

The one with the hay bales is just to show the general state of the barn in which it was taken. Run down, derelict, grown over.

Edit: That was what I wanted with the robot eating the monkey's head, actually. I just think it looks kind of cool.

 

[Brutus]

Bump

 

[Derrel]

You did a good job at showing and conveying mood and beautiful light. The massive oak tree at sunset and the windows in the old garage were my favorites.

 

[Brutus]

Anyone else?

 

[Brutus]

I'll bump this one more time.