First attempt at portrait C&C Please!!!!

[JIP]

I think the pose in that last one is not a good one for a man.

 

[drflet]

I think that the pictures have a lot of potential, and you're on the right track. It would be helpful if you posted some of the details of how the shots were set up - what type of lighting did you use? What were camera settings, etc.? Focus seems to be an issue, especially in the latter sets you posted.

Nice start though.