First attempt, C&C please

[eric_the_red]

D7000 ISO 100 F2.8 1/60 50mm 1.8D

A little smoothing and sharpening in Aperture
Thanks

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[Corvphotography]

if im being picky, i would have had a little more light on her left side of her face. I can deal w the composition of the photo and i like her expression

 

[RauschPhotography]

Looks like it could use a little warming to me.

 

[cnutco]

I agree, a little warming and a touch of fill would make this even better.

Thanks for sharing!

 

[Derrel]

Swinging the camera around to vertical might have given a better overall look at her. Failing that, at least crouching down a bit lower and eliminating the extra space at the top of the frame would have been good. it just feels like she is placed a bit too low and to the right hand side of the frame. I like her expression. I wish the tip of her nose had been in-focus though.

 

[Photo Lady]

i agree with above points.... it is a very nice photo just needs a little more light all the way around her face which would warm the photo to perfection.

 

[eric_the_red]

Thanks for the input.