First Critique post

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  1. Mar 6, 2005 #1
    mkedre

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    I had this in the photo gallery but figured I'd give it a shot in the Critique gallery. I'm anxious for any remarks!

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  2. Mar 6, 2005 #2
    DocFrankenstein

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    Nice pic. The swan is overexposed though. :)
     
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    Mikis

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    Composition is good but overexposure is spoiling effect. Birds are losing many, probably vety interesting, details.
     
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    Verbal

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    Oooh, can I try black and whiting it??
     
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    NikonChick

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    not a bad attempt. Try again when the suns not so harsh, then youll keep the details in the whites.
     
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    JonMikal

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    what he ^ said
     
  7. Mar 7, 2005 #7
    mkedre

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    Thanks for the advice! Didn't realize about the swan being overexposed until I was told but I totally see it now! I'll keep trying. =)
     

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