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Rosy

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These are very nice! I like the second one the best!
 
The matte effect to me seems to give some of them a bit of an almost hazy look. I'd think next time too about checking and arranging the hair as women move and change poses, especially with longer hair.

You have plenty of space above the subjects but with some I'd think about where the bottom of the frame is, so you're not getting an edge of something or cutting someone off. For example in the first one I think it would be better not seeing the edges of the legs and might make for a cleaner composition if it was framed able the bottom of the girls' skirts. In the last one, stripes can be tricky and that dress looks fine but I'd probably have framed above the bottom of the white shirt instead of below (just preference on that). In the second to last I'd rather not see them cropped off above the wrists and the girl's bracelet is rather distracting (cute! but would rather see it if the hand was posed differently but not have it at the edge of the frame), otherwise they look good and it's a lovely shot of them.
 
The matte effect to me seems to give some of them a bit of an almost hazy look. I'd think next time too about checking and arranging the hair as women move and change poses, especially with longer hair.

You have plenty of space above the subjects but with some I'd think about where the bottom of the frame is, so you're not getting an edge of something or cutting someone off. For example in the first one I think it would be better not seeing the edges of the legs and might make for a cleaner composition if it was framed able the bottom of the girls' skirts. In the last one, stripes can be tricky and that dress looks fine but I'd probably have framed above the bottom of the white shirt instead of below (just preference on that). In the second to last I'd rather not see them cropped off above the wrists and the girl's bracelet is rather distracting (cute! but would rather see it if the hand was posed differently but not have it at the edge of the frame), otherwise they look good and it's a lovely shot of them.

Thank you Sharon

Like every new experience - you make mistakes and learn from them. I appreciate your input. The backdrop I chose for this event was too short so I cropped where it actually ended, in hindsight I should have just lowered it, but...

Again thank you for your time. I truly appreciate it
 

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