Ok...so I will ask you for some answers. You shot the picture in manual mode. Why did you choose 320ISO? Why did you decide to shoot at 1/4000 second at f-7.1? Did you "purposefully" disobey the rule of thirds? and if so why?
I am not attacking you in any way. I just want you to answer these questions, because you are the ultimate answer. If you set out to capture this light this way, you designed your shot, and captured what YOU wanted, then the image was a success, regardless of anyone else's opinion. We can give you ideas of how WE would like to have seen it, but ultimately it was all you.