First Picture Post C&C...

[mynameistin]

Alright before i hit the sack thought id resize some images for faster viewing and throw three up...Ive been shooting since mid January so any tips pointer everything id greatly appreciate. Thanks in advance

 

[myvinyl333]

The composition is quite good on all three. I would however crop the top of the 1st photo~

 

[mynameistin]

thank you for the kind words myvinyl

 

[eVilcreations]

They're all crap!!!!


hahahahaha, just kidding Justin!!!! Welcome to TPF man!!!

 

[KevinPutman]

I really like the sky on the second one.
although I think it would look nice with more vibrance/saturation.
Just my opinion =p

 

[analog.universe]

These are cool! the third one really has a sense of space and mood

 

[mynameistin]

thanks guys...i did think that about the sky with the horse and the only reason i didnt was to jsut go with the day. it was real cloudy and overall sort of a crappy day as it has been for about the last week so far.

 

[photogirl2002]

I the second shot I would have made the horse in focus and over just a touch to the left.

In the last one I would have moved way over to the left and focused on the three older people more and less on the bench itself.

The focus should be on the older people, I think, because they are more interesting than the bench and there is some kind of story behind three people sitting together on a bench rather than just a bench. If you use rule of thirds, our focus is on the bench, which is a little uninteresting in some ways. Still, I like it the way it is too. Does that make any sense? Yeah, I doubt it! LOL! But it was meant to be CC and not just criticism. Just ideas.

 

[Samerr9]

no.2 :thumbup:

 

[mattinthehat]

I really like #1. I'm not sure I like this aspect ratio and maybe see a tad more space on the left side of the image. Then again, maybe that's why I like it so much. It feels kind of like the flower doesn't belong.

:thumbup:

 

[mynameistin]

thanks a ton guys for the kind comments...photogirl i totally understand what your saying no worries i take it as CC when its full resoultion maybe the three people catch your idea easier? i went with the rule of thirds and i also make a grid in my camera well imagine a grid and i placed them in the bottom left intersection so what your saying would look good i did try haha i guess i just failed slightly or due to the small resolution i uploaded it failed me but i will try this again! thanks again everyone

 

[photocist]

The line created by the horse throws me right out of the photo. Try placing it so the head is facing into the frame, rather than out.

 

[L0vemedead]

Crop a little off the top of the first one.
#2 little more color to the sky and you got it!
#3 I love it. Favorite one