First portrait. Input please!

[dave196]

It said ok to edit, hope you don't mind


hmmm looking on that now the colours still seem a little off.
Im pretty much the most colour blind you can be, so colour balance away

 

[shawnxstl]

Here are pictures of my lighting set up. Any advice on placement/diffusing with house hold items would be greatly appreciated.

 

[dave196]

For early lighting rigs, I used crinkled tinfoil rings around the edges of all my lights. this helps diffuse light and make it a bit more ambient.

 

[delizo23]

try B&W, desaturate the yellow