First Portrait newbie

[sandrat]

Shot with 2 umbrellas and speedlights in a clamshell. The color on my iPhone seems to have low saturation, however on my pc and monitor the color is great. Wondering how the color is on your device? - and any other advice you may have.

Thx

 

[thetrue]

I can verify it has low saturation on iPhone

 

[sandrat]

Ha so I'm not crazy! Thx

 

[jowensphoto]

Seems underexposed on my monitor. Her skin also looks a little grey.

 

[sactown024]

I like the pose and framing, def needs some lighting though and skin tone adjustments.

 

[pixmedic1 1]

looks a bit underexposed to me as well.

 

[sandrat]

Thanks guys.... This one looks some better on my phone as a comparison

 

[pixmedic1 1]

new one looks MUCH better! :thumbup:

 

[JacaRanda]

Very pretty woman! Looks like she is pushing or holding something against her head/hair with the right hand.

 

[sandrat]

Thank you she is my wife and as it were very patient with my newest hobby I'll try to do some adjusting of the monitor after work today.

 

[jowensphoto]

Much better! From my iPhone the edit looks very rich in color and properly exposed.

 

[sandrat]

Thank you

 

[ghache]

the second one is wayyyyy better.

 

[sandrat]

Thanks