I did this shoot for a local comedian in December. It was my first time doing anything like this, so I was nervous. Any and all critique is welcome. Looking for compositional suggestions as well as editing.
2 is a great shot. 3 needs to have a bit of a reflector pushing some light into the face.
1 is just overexposed and washed out. Fixable? probably. Worth fixing? probably not. Too many distractions in it.
Second shot is my favorite too.2 is fantastic. Really nice.
I think you captured an interesting look on his face, but the treatment is kinda an odd choice and I cannot for the life of me figure out what the hell his head is sticking out of, which becomes very distracting.