first portrait

[Breeezo Photography]

yup well, this is my first shoot with a person!
any thing to improve?

 

[mdtusz]

Looks a little soft or out of focus or something and the wb looks a bit off too.

For this shot, I'd try with a square crop too. It's *too* asymmetrical right now with the one post/pillar completely there and the other cut off.

Cute girl though. I love the skinny ones where their dresses always look like they could fall off at any minute I'm not old yet so I'm allowed to say that!

 

[mdtusz]

Now that I've said that, I'd spin the model around 180º so that her zipper side on her dress isn't showing. Just a little nit-pick.

 

[Fedaykin]

mdtusz pretty much said it all

 

[verticalization]

I'd even go one step further on the crop, and cut out the two pillars completely.. they super distract my eyes from the girl

 

[PerfectlyFlawed]

MDTUSZpretty much said it.. i agree.
Id also crop the pillars... and i would have her hold her hair differently... looks tacky. Blunt, but its just my opinion.

 

[mdtusz]

Aww I feel so loved when people agree with me:hugs:

 

[PerfectlyFlawed]

Aww I feel so loved when people agree with me:hugs:

Aww! :hugs: hahaha!!!