first post here, C&C most welcome

[sweet_a]

 

[Keith Gebhardt]

#1 is pretty nice. i love how you used black and white, to show its age with the older man. Capturing this show while he was playing the guitar and hurmonika shows his personallity/interests.

well spoken picture.

Crit.. just a little nitpic.. would have been nice to see more of the guitar.

 

[Boden]

I really like how you seem to have made the old man's face blend right in to the harmonica. Very nice.

The focus in the dog photo is on his nose. Try focusing on eyeballs instead. It's typically unsettling when eyes are not the focal point.

The third photo is really cool, except that it would have been much better had her fingertip been the focal point. I know, same kind of critique as last time, but I think it would have really helped. The finger itself is the primary subject, not the letters.

 

[just x joey]

love number 1. even though theres a blown out part, still looks great.

 

[cupidcutie4u]

Like someone said with the guitar thing. But I love it. The pic might look plain without it. I kinda like it in the pic though, because it shows that the man is multi talented

 

[sweet_a]

BODEN - thanks for pointing that out, I hadnt noticed until you said something... the focal point is on the nose!

Thanks everyone!