First Post, New to photography, much need of C&C

[AxelMoney]

3/31/10 2:19pm

Since it was on old jeep in an old style garage, I felt it needed a Sepia touch
ISO 400
18mm
f/5.6
1/200

3/31/10 2:17pm

ISO 400
20mm
f/5
1/200

3/31/10 2:11pm

This was hard to get, I just think I should of blurred the background more.
ISO 400
45mm
f/6.3
1/250

3/31/10 2:27pm

ISO 800
53mm
f/5.6
1/200

I ordered the pictures from my fav. to least fav.

thanks for your time.

 

[m.stevenson]

I'm no pro, but make sure you have a defined subject and make sure this subject is clear(pic 4) and if you are trying to consecrate the eye on one thing make sure the background is cluttered (pic 3)

 

[pbelarge]

Axel
I took the liberty to crop one of your shots.

Sometimes less is more. :mrgreen:


The tree would probably looked better at less of an angle, so it goes across and on somewhat of an diagonal.

This crop gives an idea, although it is not what I was trying to show you. Notice there are less distractions.

 

[er111a]

like #1 but seems blury

 

[aliciaqw]

I *think* there are some focus issues with #1 and #2.

#1 just seems odd for me...maybe there needs to be more emphasis on the Jeep? Maybe a closer crop...?

#2 could be better if there was a clear focus on the ax.

 

[AxelMoney]

I *think* there are some focus issues with #1 and #2.

#1 just seems odd for me...maybe there needs to be more emphasis on the Jeep? Maybe a closer crop...?

#2 could be better if there was a clear focus on the ax.

different shot with the ax

and a re shot of the jeep(i think it came out better with a shot at a different time of day)

 

[AxelMoney]

Axel
I took the liberty to crop one of your shots.

Sometimes less is more. :mrgreen:


The tree would probably looked better at less of an angle, so it goes across and on somewhat of an diagonal.

This crop gives an idea, although it is not what I was trying to show you. Notice there are less distractions.

Gotcha. it does look a bit better maybe ill try different angles with it tomorrow if the weather is permitting.