First post! Whatcha think?

[goaway]

shot with a D90 and a 50 f/1.8

im pretty new to doing model shoots

 

[ashleyx]

I'm drawn to her feet in this photo which are blurry. I do enjoy how the ground slopes downward though. Welcome to the forum!

 

[Ady]

Looks like the focus is on the brickwork. Would have been nice to see her face the camera and have her eyes tack sharp. Good spot for a pic though.

 

[The Empress]

Welcome!!! I really like the composition of the shot, just slightly out of focus. (I have that problem a lot lol)

 

[goaway]

thanks for the input

 

[GeorgieGirl]

One thing I learned (and I am new here too) is to not let the eye farthest away not have the smallest amount of skin show around it. The model, if turned just a tiny bit more to the camera would have prevented the eyeball from floating in mid air on the edge of the background and the the tip of her nose would have been inside her skin rather than peeking out into the background. Do you see what I mean?

Good Luck with your efforts, I like the black and white, I don't shoot in black and white and I really enjoy seeing others do it.

 

[shadowlands]

I think it's a nice shot. And I'm sure your model will think so as well. Thanks for sharing.

 

[Chellie]

Nice! But I agree with the others about the model being out of focus.