First "street" shots + 1 other for c&c please

[TylerF]

tried some street shots today, got rejected the first time after building up the nerve to ask. but i think it helped thicken my skin. the second lady agreed to let me and in turn i offered to send her prints so she can send them to her son in iraq who she hasnt seen in 5 years.

another from the night

 

[TylerF]

C&C welcome btw. Be harsh if needed

 

[Tulsa]

I like the chair, would be nice if it was more centered, but I like it.

 

[AG74683]

for me, Number 1 would be just a touch better if she actually wasnt looking at the camera. Kinda like she was looking away thinking of her son, if you know what I mean. Still, very good shots.

 

[TylerF]

Yeah, people were eyeing me down in the store, I caught a weird vibe lol. What about the ones of the young lady?

 

[Tulsa]

What about the ones of the young lady?

I only see an ol lady

 

[TylerF]

I know. I was being sarcastic/nice about her lol.

 

[gsgary]

Personally i wouldn't class the first 2 shots as street shots because they don't take in enough of the environment

 

[bazooka]

I like the chair shot. It seems to be a bit tilted though, and the ladder coming out of the chair feels wierd. A neat shot though. Makes me want to sit down in that chair.

 

[TylerF]

Thanks. Yeah, its not perfect. I might try it again sometime lol

I don't know what to classify it as then. I didn't know her and approached her asking if I could take some pictures of her.

 

[AliasPros]

the later coming out of the chair is weird but interesting none the less, I spent more then a few seconds analyzing the pic which is good! Not really feeling the ol lady pics don't know why...

 

[TylerF]

haha thanks, it was my first time photographing someone in public. i thought she looked interesting.

 

[Einstein]

I like the chair one, cool idea and i get nostalgic scholarly vibe.... whatever that is lol.

 

[TylerF]

Haha good ol borders lol

 

[Einstein]

haha the wonders of b&W!