First Time Car Shoot C&C welcome

So below are a quick shoot I did for a good friend after we had finished washing my car. Don't know what to think of them. Personally I like them thought I'm sure I can improve on em (hate the reflection of myself in em). C&C is welcome and any tips are welcome as well. Enjoy.


IMG_0113.jpg by LJCPhotos, on Flickr


IMG_0109.jpg by LJCPhotos, on Flickr


IMG_0105.jpg by LJCPhotos, on Flickr


IMG_0104.jpg by LJCPhotos, on Flickr

 

Nice shots.... but what reflection?

 

I need to learn bow to clone better lol

 

Is the vignetting intentional or fall off in the lens?

 

It's intentional.

 

Wanted to draw the viewers I to the car by creatibgs tunnel to it

 

looks good!

 

It works

 

With such tight crops I don't see the vignetting as being necessary. I would also loosen the crop some, no need to fill the frame with the car, let some of the background show. A circular polarizer will help with reflections, having one is a must for automotive shooting. In the last one, the front wheel is turned the wrong way, you want to have the wheel face flat to the camera. At that shooting angle the wheel would only need a slight turn, if any.
A good start in general.

 

It's in the brake light.

 

I especially like #2. Good interior shot.

 

hahaha... I missed that!