First time shooting traincar closeup c&c appreciated

[E-jeezy]

Here's a few photo's I took today, any thoughts or opinions?

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2.

Thanks!

 

[Jeff Canes]

IMO with #1 the DOF is too short, I would like to see all the artwork in focus. Did you have reason for wanting the DOF short?

 

[E-jeezy]

I wasn't planning on it, but it was reasonably dark and I was focusing manually so I couldn't really tell if it was in focus or not.

 

[manaheim]

Actually, 1 is pretty neat. I might have done something different with positioning but overall it's an interesting shot and reasonably well executed.

DOF is fine.