First Wedding C&C please

[bhee321]

i've only been shooting for a couple months. My girlfriends cousin was having a small backyard wedding and couldnt afford a photographer so i told them that i would shoot around. well here are a couple that i edited.

 

[flyingember]

they're dark and you have a weird blue cast going on

your crops are way too tight, cutting off parts of heads is just bad

 

[bhee321]

its weird. the originals dont look quite as dark. i pulled these off of shutterfly. but i do agree they probably could use a lil bit of brightening up