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deathdealer

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i know its a little oof but i forgot my tripod other than that. c&c please!!!!


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it's a little too contrasty for me. with flowers and other delicate subjects i like things light and airy.
 
A bit oversaturated - but that may be a look that you were aiming for. Also, I am not a fan of cropping off bits of the subject of an image, in this case, the top and bottom parts of the petals - prefer to see the whole image.

Cheers,

WesternGuy
 
Its kind of hard to get past the OOF for me, but besides that the vignette is a bit powerful, and the image is too saturated.
 
I think your exposure was a little wonky as well. It looks like the anthers are blown out. I don't mind the saturation as sometimes the rich colors work with flowers/vegetation but the vingetting, crop and DOF issues don't work for me either. I try to get as much of the flower in focus as I can without getting crap bokeh.
 
@infinite what is wrong with my exposure? thanks all for the c&c.
 
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@infinite what is wrong with my exposure? thanks all for the c&c.

It may not be if it's the effect you were looking for but the anthers in the middle of the flower look like the white is overexposed.
 

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