Flower Shots (2)

Trenton Romulox

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Critique is not only appreciated, it's straight up encouraged. Lay it on me, hardcore. I want some harsh, honest, down to earth, straight-talkin' critique folks, you won't hurt my feelings, promise.

Sepia Flowers:
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Magenta Flowers:
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Taken with Nikon 14-24mm on Nikon D300 using Nikon SB-800 off-camera as remote flash.
 
I like the two tone effect in your first photo. The second one is not as interesting (to me) but I do like the first shot.
 
I don't like the glow around the flowers in the first one. But I like the idea. The second one might either have to much contrast or is too dark or something. They are both pretty good though.
 
It’s not my style so I will pass on any hardcore critiques.

For #1: The foreground is large and empty, the angle of stem or it run off the drop seem odd to me, and I can see a dark line where the drop end in the upper left; hope that helps
 

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