I think there's potential here, but IMO, what's hurting the image is the bright background and the reflections on the glass in front. Since the eye is naturally attracted to bright objects, it's pulled right through the garage to the background. My thought is: Wait 'til evening, and then have a friend poke a speedlight through one of those broken windows to illuminate the interior just a little, and expose to enhance the broken glass & signs on the front.