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Aaah, nice ! Perfect use of b&w. Well noticed and used subject. Very synthetic and clean, almost abstract. I like it very much. Did you work this motive a little more ? Different angles ? Framing ? There are some groupings which would create nice pictures on its own.
 
Ooh, this is a fun photo with an absolutely-perfect title. My only suggestion would be to darken the lower 25% of the frame a bit, not only because it appears a bit hot but also because it distracts from the real fun happening above.

Good stuff, Frequency!
 
Neat photo and I like the B&W conversion. Have you thought about cropping out the bottom part below the major shelf? The lower part that are almost all circular draws the viewer's eye away from the top part because it is alittle brighter. My 0.02¢ FWIW.

WesternGuy
 
Yes, great image and title. I agree with others about darkening the bottom and about cropping out some smaller images from this.
 
Aaah, nice ! Perfect use of b&w. Well noticed and used subject. Very synthetic and clean, almost abstract. I like it very much. Did you work this motive a little more ? Different angles ? Framing ? There are some groupings which would create nice pictures on its own.

Thank you very much, Timor; actually that was not a sure shot at the time of click; it was shot in the year of 2009; till the day i had never processed or thought of showing it anywhere; while i worked on it a few days earlier, i felt "this is not bad". Then i posted it. i had no other images from there. Regards :D
Thank you very much BTL :D
Ooh, this is a fun photo with an absolutely-perfect title. My only suggestion would be to darken the lower 25% of the frame a bit, not only because it appears a bit hot but also because it distracts from the real fun happening above.

Good stuff, Frequency!
Thank you very much Invis. Whta you have suggested is worthy of being worked out; thanks again :D
Cool photo Frequency!
Thank you very much BS :D

Neat photo and I like the B&W conversion. Have you thought about cropping out the bottom part below the major shelf? The lower part that are almost all circular draws the viewer's eye away from the top part because it is alittle brighter. My 0.02¢ FWIW.

WesternGuy
Thank you so much WG; i too had a feeling that the incomplete bottom could be problematic; will take care; Regards :D

Yes, great image and title. I agree with others about darkening the bottom and about cropping out some smaller images from this.
Good idea K; i will generate some off springs then ;) thank you very much; Regards :D
 
I like it but for me it would have more abstract appeal if the focus was on one area,
either by cropping or shot closer-in/longer focal-length.
 
Thank you panblue very much for your analysis :D
 

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