Girl in the Art Museum

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I think I would like it better if she was looking at the artwork.
 
I don't. I like it as is. The only thing that kinda struck me is her face is dark but there's plenty of detail there so I like it, very much. It's a work of art from within the art.
 
Thank you all for your kind comments. I intentionally asked her to look at another artwork piece in front of her which is not in the photo.
 
xyphoto; crop tighter, mostly off the bottom. Too late for bracketed exposure, but perhaps you can lighten the shadow areas of the girl in pp. Also I think it is tilted a bit.
 
tirediron said:
Just enough off the bottom so that you include all of her shadow on the floor; that's an essential component. I think too, a slight contrast increase might help.

Thanks guys. I will give it a try.
 
I think it is beautiful.
 

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