Give me some critiques on this

[kusetjuv]

My neighbour's kid



Could I done anything different? I cropped the image since I felt it had too much space around and also added curve tweaks and fixed midtones ++
+ added lightning effects +

The image also looked too soft so I added sharpen.

 

[The_Traveler]

I think this an interesting shot, angle and processing; an overall success.
The only little issue is that burnt out area on his nose.

 

[kusetjuv]

I think this an interesting shot, angle and processing; an overall success.
The only little issue is that burnt out area on his nose.

Thanks! Well..thats a shadow, dont know how to make it better :x

 

[The_Traveler]

No, I meant this completely white area.

 

[kusetjuv]

No, I meant this completely white area.

Oh, sorry well, I didnt happen to notice before now. gonna try fix it