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[eric1971]

I liked the symmetry and large numbers.

C&C please.

Thanks!




Edit: Second try

 

[charlie76]

Bing(*)...I like this abstract image. But please straighten it...then you get the o

 

[cgipson1]

need to kill the glare on the camera right "9".. it kills it... make it more symmetrical!

 

[eric1971]

Bing(*)...I like this abstract image. But please straighten it...then you get the o

Doors are dead strait, painted lines are not square.

 

[sapper6fd]

Painted lines are out because of the lens distortion. Easy fix in PS or Lightroom.

 

[charlie76]

look at the top right corner

 

[eric1971]

look at the top right corner

I see what you are talking about now, thanks. I'm a noob, so you got to be specific!

 

[charlie76]

Gotcha bro!

 

[eric1971]

Added second edit to original post.

Made some changes based on the comments.

Thanks!

 

[deeky]

Much better on the second. The symmetry really comes out nice as it is polished up.

 

[AaronLLockhart]

First one is tilted slightly to the right, however, The second one seems to be off still, but I think it's actually framed straight. I think it's suffering from a slight amount of barrel distortion.

 

[eric1971]

First one is tilted slightly to the right, however, The second one seems to be off still, but I think it's actually framed straight. I think it's suffering from a slight amount of barrel distortion.

Tried to correct the distortion, but there was no place where it looked perfect.