Gondolas in Venice (Critique please)

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  1. Ankit

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    A shot of the Gondolas in Venice.
    Should I do away with the watermark or not??

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    Watermark is your decision. I feel that I'm drawn to the railing since that's what you focused in on...not sure I like what you focused on. Seems like a nice place though.
     
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    Yeah, the railing was my intended object of focus. I like the the bit unfocused effect of the gondolas and the focus on the railing. Took this photo by keeping the camera on the railing and focusing on the railing.
     
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    Don't like the point of focus, looks more like an accident than on purpose (and yes, I know you said you did it purposely)
     
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    Your image is about Gondolas where as all of them remain OOF.... about 90% of the image is unfocused and what is left to see is the rail

    So i feel sorry :er:
     
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    Thanks for the comments.
    So if i would have focused on the gondolas then should I have kept the railing in the frame or not?
     
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    You should have attempted both and have selected the best.... ;)
     
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    Thank you, I was beginning out at that time, so wasn't as informed.
     
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    Don't worry...your's is the time ahead :D
     
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