The idea is good, but it's a little blurry. I'd try to take it again if you can. It's just slightly out of focus and it could be better. Good content though. I agree about the hair. Not there. On the face is nice, but not over her eye. You'd get the sexy effect you were looking for though if you pulled it off to the side a bit and maybe had her hold it and make like she's contemplating chewing on it maybe. She'd need a bit of a Mona Lisa smile for it to work, but in that outfit, it would be a nice pose.