Graffiti and Barbed Wire

[Beatnik]

Some shots I took from an alley way in the CBD.

What do we think? All C&C welcome.

 

[Ryan L]

1. could be alright, I just don't like the door frame right on the edge, and it looks a tad underexposed. I think I am wanting to see more of the big picture.
2 is out of focus and again I don't care for the door being cut off.
3. Is overexposed, you are losing detail because of it.

Maybe try from a different angle. Shoot the whole scale of the wall, looking from a corner all the way down. I am not sure what all is there but there might be something from another angle.

 

[er111a]

they dont seem in detail and they seem over saturated/exposed