Having fun at the park slide, plus electric hair static

THORHAMMER · Mar 6, 2007

They reallly like slides....

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Peacemaker636 · Mar 6, 2007

#4 is probably the best composition, but that orange spiral is distracting. It might be able to be cloned out though.

The_Traveler · Mar 6, 2007

These pix are pretty static and don't convey much of what must have been going on. Just keep on taking pictures until the site of you with a camera won't freeze your daughter in her tracks.

AIRIC · Mar 6, 2007

The_Traveler said:
These pix are pretty static and don't convey much of what must have been going on. Just keep on taking pictures until the site of you with a camera won't freeze your daughter in her tracks.

Huh? Other then the first shot which is more of a posed shot they all look like there is action going on to me and she doesnt look frozen in her tracks.

Pics look good to me other then being a little soft on the focus.

Eric

Corbin · Mar 6, 2007

I understand that the girl is the main point, but i have a hard time really seeing i guess..... i like the idea and such but in number 2 the orange slide is quite distracting. I like them overall but a different angle on 2 would improve it greatly!! and i really like number 4 but i agree with a post above me, the orabge spiral could been seen as distracting.... good job

THORHAMMER · Mar 6, 2007

yeah, shes sliding around in all these, and there just snapshots pretty much,

just wanted to show the static hair effect... thats all...

I thought it was kinda cool how her hair was sticking up.....

LaFoto · Mar 7, 2007

Yes, I can see the funny element of her hair sticking out in all of these (but the first, which is all different in its manner).
And I cannot help but love the background in the first. Her smile is cute in that one, too. Focus is a tad soft, but well. She looks cute and the green (!) grass as background ... no need to tell you all over again, eh? :wink:

I think some have the potential of being "lead out of their snapshot-ism" by simply cropping them a bit, like making 2 vertical and losing most of the orange on the right, or by cropping 3 in from above and the right (just my ideas) ... Maybe?