hmmm....i am really sorry, i found it somewhat busy !!!the main problem i found is what is in focus anf what is out of focus are having the same shade and makes the distinction difficult; i am not impressed by the wide white foreground too.... . You should not feel offended, please
Regards
No offense taken at all, Frequency. Thanks to all for the comments. I was trying something a little different composition wise and I'm still on the fence about it myself.