Headshot - One of my first attempts

WilliamH

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This is one of my first attempts at portraiture. Critiques are more than welcome.

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I like it but im no photography pro.

What im more interested in is her tattoos! They look great.
 
Overall, pretty good job.
Few points to lookout for are straw/cup as was mentioned above, u cut her head - i have mixed feelings AGAIN but you cut her ear - I don't like that a BIT.
Now, keep in mind few little things - PRINT. If you're print a 4x6 might not be a problem but 4x5 won't come out b/c you framed too tight.
 
Being a total noob, but trying to learn...

for some reason the first thing I concentrated on was the few stray hairs on her forehead. I found that distracting... then the straw.

Great subject, nice pose methinks...
 
Overall, pretty good job.
Few points to lookout for are straw/cup as was mentioned above, u cut her head - i have mixed feelings AGAIN but you cut her ear - I don't like that a BIT.
Now, keep in mind few little things - PRINT. If you're print a 4x6 might not be a problem but 4x5 won't come out b/c you framed too tight.
Very good reply.
 
Shutter speed is too slow for the focal length used giving you a soft image, which is a shame because she has nice eyes, get them in focus
 

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