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[momof2]

#1- not sure what you were going for.
#2- missed the focus and a little dark.
#3- a little dark.
#4- dark again, portraits need some fill light.

I do not get it when people say no editing has been done. This is an honest question, not sarcastic, do you not edit because you think they do not need it?
I would have edited them before you posted, they could look a lot better after some PP.

I was going for the clam shells in my daughters hand in the first

I haven't edited my stuff because I haven't taken the time to sit down and do it. Right now I'm raising my 2 kids alone while hubby is in afghan. So right now I just save them on the computer until I find a day I can sit down and play with editing lol

 

[momof2]

The one of the girl is GREAT! and Even better in B&W like BuS RiDeR has shown.

The flower and shell pics seem to be out of focus/focusing on wrong part of the subject.

I'm going to post more of hers she is easy to take pics of

 

[lunaaa]

no2 and 4 are beautiful ,nice composition and colors,also the girl has a pretty face and a relaxed pose you might want to shoot her more.
as for no 3 its out of focus.

I actually shot her a lot. That's my stepdaughter who is going for modeling a acting. I have about 160 on my computer from that day I cann post more of those for C&C

Also my camera is a cannon rebel 12.2 mp using auto focus

she'd make a great model,share more photos.