Honoring and American Hero

[WCB Photography]

How does this photo look?

I want the flag to resemble age.

 

[reznap]

It looks ok. A bit yellow. I'd fix the color cast, bring up the exposure a bit, add some grunge.

Like this:

Also, consider cropping some of the bottom & right side, making the subject more prominent in the frame.

 

[WCB Photography]

Thanks, reznap, that looks a lot better.

 

[tygr1]

A very worthy cause. Nicely composed shot.

 

[WCB Photography]

Here is a better copy.

 

[Bram]

i noticed you changed your watermark. I would make it bigger and a different font.

 

[reznap]

Yeah, how about something like:

Britannic Bold, 50% opacity, half black, half white.