Monica Fermin
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that bad huh?
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hehe, Nah, you just have to give it 24 to 48 hours.
I like it. It's a good shot.
My critique would be to give it a smaller aperture (bigger number) so that more of the petals are in the DOF range. Either that or focus on the inner-bottom of the flower if you want the petal tips DOF blurred like that. I would also run it through two levels of sharpening to bring out those wonderful flower/plant vein textures.
Excellent framing, good exposure, interesting subject.
Keep them coming! And thanks for sharing!
I like it. It's a good shot.
My critique would be to give it a smaller aperture (bigger number) so that more of the petals are in the DOF range. Either that or focus on the inner-bottom of the flower if you want the petal tips DOF blurred like that. I would also run it through two levels of sharpening to bring out those wonderful flower/plant vein textures.
Excellent framing, good exposure, interesting subject.
Keep them coming! And thanks for sharing!
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