I hope this works!

[klpepper]

So I was finally able to try out my camera yesterday. My daughter was a very willing model for me I dont know much about my camera yet so I am hoping to get some feedback so I can start my learning process.

More importantly I hope I can post my pictures properly (i did read the tutorial but that doesnt mean much haha!)

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[klpepper]

ugh it didnt work.....

 

[480sparky43 42]

1 is crooked.

2 has her hands cut off.

3 has the top of her head lopped off... eyes should be looking at camera.

 

[GreatPhotoRace]

It seems that you have pretty good control of your camera in terms of exposure. A few spots are a little blown out, but that's easily adjusted. I would concentrate on composition next--especially in portraiture.

 

[jowensphoto]

1 is crooked.

2 has her hands cut off.

3 has the top of her head lopped off... eyes should be looking at camera.

^Agree with all but #3. I don't think a person needs to look directly at the camera EVERY shot (sometimes not looking is more powerful than looking, kwim?).

Exposure is quite nice, and the composition is not hopeless. Keep working at it and keep practicing, you can only get better

 

[Robin Usagani]

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[Joey_Ricard]

good replies so far

Bridge shot, you have editing ability, straighten the horizon at least

My first thought about the 2nd shot (with the girl standing by the wall) was that the background really detracts at this angle. Something to always think about.

The last shot is fine with me

 

[KmH]

It seems that you have pretty good control of your camera in terms of exposure.

What exposure mode was used?

Green Auto, Av, Tv, P, M ?

Looks like all the EXIF data was stripped.