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heavanslilangel

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Ive been spending a lot of time trying to capture emotions and personality as well as trying to improve my portrait photography skills.
Here are two ive taken and i would love some feedback if anyone has a few minites. $IMG_5036 (640x800).jpg$IMG_5261-2 (533x800).jpg
 

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1. Not overly fussed about this one; it does show emotion, certainly, but I don't "get much" from it. I'd prefer to see the left side a little darker and the right a little brighter; the blown area is really pulling my eye away from her face.

2. This one is rather nice. I'm not a fan of the vignette or the Dutch tilt, but those are personal preferences. I like the exposure and the expression on the child's face. Cute shot.
 

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