In studio shoot - Male - C&C Appreciated

[valonphoto]

So here we go...
The second shot of my photography career, and so far I'm loving it!

Gear
Canon 5D Mark II
85mm 1.8
Alien Bees ab 800 with beauty dish
Seamless white backdrop

As you can see in my previous post I used to shoot Nikon. But due to being in the right place at the right time (or as all the Nikon users out there would see it I was in the wrong place at the wrong time) I was at a gig with my fiancé, who is a professional model, and the photographer let me shoot her with his Mark II. I instantly fell in love and found a good deal on a used one on craigslist. And switched all my gear, I make it sound like I had a lot.

Phots

 

[tirediron]

Hmmm... I think I`d like to see a little more exposure on the left (image right) side of his face; not a lot, say a reflector close in or something like that. I do have to wonder why his eyes are looking the direction they are though; his expression doesn`t really work for me.

 

[AgentDrex]

Seamless white backdrop

Hmm?

 

[tirediron]

Seamless white backdrop

Hmm?

Very under exposed seamless white perhaps...