In The Air - Thania M.

[GrahamPhisher]

From a shoot today I had in the morning with this girl b4 her dance practice, btw it was my first dance based photoshoot.

N errr no replies on my otha topic?!

http://www.thephotoforum.com/forum/people-photography/316151-boomtho-clothing-2-last-night.html

 

[e.rose]

I love your processing, but I'm not a fan of the crop, honestly. Dance is about whole-body movement and you cut off 3 of her limbs... And your title is "In the Air' but you gave her no "room to fly" with your cropping.

 

[GrahamPhisher]

I love your processing, but I'm not a fan of the crop, honestly. Dance is about whole-body movement and you cut off 3 of her limbs... And your title is "In the Air' but you gave her no "room to fly" with your cropping.

oooooh maybe I'll change the title to "No Room To Fly", but yea I understand where your coming from, I have plenty of other photos to edit from this shoot, so i'll keep your comment in mind, thnx for the luv on the processing tho.

 

[e.rose]

I love your processing, but I'm not a fan of the crop, honestly. Dance is about whole-body movement and you cut off 3 of her limbs... And your title is "In the Air' but you gave her no "room to fly" with your cropping.

oooooh maybe I'll change the title to "No Room To Fly", but yea I understand where your coming from, I have plenty of other photos to edit from this shoot, so i'll keep your comment in mind, thnx for the luv on the processing tho.

I look forward to seeing what else you got! :sillysmi: Hopefully I won't miss it with my move going on.

 

[GrahamPhisher]

Updated it, removed a tan line...

 

[cgipson1]

I like it, except for above mentioned cropping of limbs... If you have similar that are more open... please post 'em!

 

[kathyt]

I like the concept here, but the finger is bugging me. I like this film look though. Regarding the other thread....how in the hell do you forget your camera?

 

[cgipson1]

The more I look at this one, I don't like the way the top of her right leg blends into the background....

 

[GrahamPhisher]

I like the concept here, but the finger is bugging me. I like this film look though. Regarding the other thread....how in the hell do you forget your camera?

Thnx, n yea those fingers hmmmm.................... i was noticing tht too a lil while ago, not like any specific editing went on there, just yea mayb i coulda lowered the shadows on there in editing tho, the light prolly wasnt reachin up there.

n as for the other thread,
well its not like we were gonna do a photoshoot, but than i thought how awesome it'd be to do a photoshoot in a hotel, since i see other photographers doin it all the time.

The more I look at this one, I don't like the way the top of her right leg blends into the background....

Yea I was looking at just that when removing the tan line tht was on there... def gonna keep tht in mind for next edit.

 

[kathyt]

I like the concept here, but the finger is bugging me. I like this film look though. Regarding the other thread....how in the hell do you forget your camera?

Thnx, n yea those fingers hmmmm.................... i was noticing tht too a lil while ago, not like any specific editing went on there, just yea mayb i coulda raised the shadows on there, the light prolly wasnt reachin up there.

n as for the other thread,
well its not like we were gonna do a photoshoot, but than i thought how awesome it'd be to do a photoshoot in a hotel, since i see other photographers doin it all the time.

The more I look at this one, I don't like the way the top of her right leg blends into the background....

Yea I was looking at just that when removing the tan line tht was on there... def gonna keep tht in mind for next edit.

I LOVE the bottom image in your signature. The pink one. I want to play with the original. The light on her face is GORGEOUS! If you wanna see how a wedding photog would edit it, send it to me and I will post my edit. [email protected]

 

[GrahamPhisher]

I like the concept here, but the finger is bugging me. I like this film look though. Regarding the other thread....how in the hell do you forget your camera?

Thnx, n yea those fingers hmmmm.................... i was noticing tht too a lil while ago, not like any specific editing went on there, just yea mayb i coulda raised the shadows on there, the light prolly wasnt reachin up there.

n as for the other thread,
well its not like we were gonna do a photoshoot, but than i thought how awesome it'd be to do a photoshoot in a hotel, since i see other photographers doin it all the time.

The more I look at this one, I don't like the way the top of her right leg blends into the background....

Yea I was looking at just that when removing the tan line tht was on there... def gonna keep tht in mind for next edit.

I LOVE the bottom image in your signature. The pink one. I want to play with the original. The light on her face is GORGEOUS! If you wanna see how a wedding photog would edit it, send it to me and I will post my edit. [email protected]

Thanx kathy, and I sent it to you btw.