I would have preferred it if he was on the right side of the shot rather than the centre. So the lit building on the right wasn't there and we'd see more of the one on the left. Plus he'd be looking into the shot which is, as a rather general rule, considered better by most.
I still like it though. B&W suits it well, nice dof and good exposure. I'll go with what Nick has said to. :thumbsup: