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[spiffybeth]

this is the original:

and this is what ive done to it:

too much? not enough?

and how is the subject as a whole? the floor line isnt straight. im aware of that.

c/c please!

 

[chris_arnet]

i like what you did, but i think the subject lacks as a whole. it just seems kinda flat to me man. just my take. other than that, i like it.

 

[domromer]

cool in an abstract way.

 

[invisible]

and how is the subject as a whole? the floor line isnt straight. im aware of that.

How about this composition?

 

[spiffybeth]

i like what you did, but i think the subject lacks as a whole. it just seems kinda flat to me man. just my take. other than that, i like it.

thanks for the feedback!

cool in an abstract way.

thanks dom!

How about this composition?

i dont like that composition, but thanks for trying!