Is this overkill? C & C please!

[bazpaul]

hey,

Havent posted here in awhile as i have been reading up alot and have been practising, hopefully this is worth some critique!

cheers for your time!

http://www.flickr.com/photos/42873613@N06/4453347947/" title="Flowers for sale by Bazpaul, on Flickr">

 

[Stamp]

After looking at it for a while... my eyes are wandering, and can't really pick up a story on it... Not really feeling anything.

 

[JeffieLove]

it also seems kind of tilted...

 

[bazooka]

I'm not sure what you mean by overkill. Perhaps you could explain? The shot is too busy for me.